being mended

February 21, 2010
My life was, Once a wreck. Like a ship, Sunken at the bottum of the ocean. I thought, I couldn't be mended.
Bt i was proven wrong. He saved my life, He saved my soul. If he were to leave, I'll be drowned forever.
He doesn't know, That he is helping me. He doesn't know, That he is healing me. He doesn't know, That he is doing these things to me.
One day he'll know, One day he'll help me, To live again. one day i'll be, Fully recovered once again.

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DerekHH said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 5:40 pm
This is a pretty interesting style. good job
Darkness.Arising replied...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 12:43 pm
thanks dat means alot especially since im still kinda new its been about a year now that ive been writing poems.
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