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being mended

February 21, 2010
By breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'My heart is like a blackhole, It has no dark end.'


My life was, Once a wreck. Like a ship, Sunken at the bottum of the ocean. I thought, I couldn't be mended.
Bt i was proven wrong. He saved my life, He saved my soul. If he were to leave, I'll be drowned forever.
He doesn't know, That he is helping me. He doesn't know, That he is healing me. He doesn't know, That he is doing these things to me.
One day he'll know, One day he'll help me, To live again. one day i'll be, Fully recovered once again.

The author's comments:
this piece tells of what is happening in the present. its about how a girl almost closed herself off from everybody until this boy comes along and helps her out. she has been hurt so much in the past, and is now being healed.

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on Mar. 16 2010 at 12:43 pm
breakaway.from.death PLATINUM, Lehigh Acres, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
'My heart is like a blackhole, It has no dark end.'

thanks dat means alot especially since im still kinda new its been about a year now that ive been writing poems.

DerekHH SILVER said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 5:40 pm
DerekHH SILVER, Millersville, Maryland
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This is a pretty interesting style. good job