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Like a drip of poison is how you spoke,
It sounded worse than a foul disease,
Your poison ran straight to my bleeding heart,
Like your fate was trying to hurt me,

Your venom sank deep into my veins,
Dissolving the unwanted nothing you had left,
The love that had washed from your red eyes of hatred…
Crushed my lungs as they screamed for your love,

Its time to forget you, my common sense reminds me,
I’ll throw you in the nearest dustbin, lock you in the nearest cage,
But our memories stop me from finishing my new mission,
I can’t completely discard you from my broken thoughts,

I’ll just shut you away in the back of my mind and throw away the key.



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olican16 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 5:28 pm:

this is really great!!!! i love this!! you should write more so i can read your amazing stuff....

 

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CarolynQ said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 10:16 pm:
Whoaaa... i love how this poem flows. its different somehow and your words are like fantastic check out my work sometime.... and good job i really really felt the emotion in it!!!
 
Han15 replied...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 3:20 pm :
I've commented on all your work. Have you ever thought about a career in writing? I'd definately recommend it,
 
CarolynQ replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 10:31 pm :
actually its my dream job.. i only wish it to come tru! and i loved all the comments thankyouuuuuu :)
 
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DaniWill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 3:38 pm:
Wow! You write so well! :) You can read and actually feel the poem
 
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Achery323 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 2:28 pm:
I really like this! Extremely well written, and i'm not sure if you meant to however one less line than a Sonnet could represent how you used to love them but withdrawn back from that feeling.
 
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GirlWithThePoems...x said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 10:28 am:
hey thanks for commenting my work. This is really emotion and deep.
well done :)
 
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Sabby said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 7:08 pm:
This is great :) So deep and well written. You really convey all of the feelings of the heart.
 
Han15 replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 1:17 am :
Thanks, i have commented on your other work :)
 
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AMS123 said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 6:33 am:
Brilliant. I wish I had written it myself!
 
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GreeGree said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 1:21 pm:
This is very heartfelt and real. Very descriptive, which I love. BTW, thanks for commenting on my work!
 
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Becky264 said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 12:13 pm:
This is great! I like how the persons throwing away the key to forget someone in your poem. Very imaginative. Keep up the good work! :D
 
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Natherine said...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 3:19 am:
LOVEE iiT :)
 
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katiepickelsimer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 12:14 am:
I like this poem! thank you for commenting on my work!
 
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Rennie said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 4:23 pm:
This is awesome! So much expression!!!!! Loved it!!!!
 
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sugrstix said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 3:41 pm:
Hey! Thanks for your comment! I really like this poem!
 
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hehasmyheart said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:31 pm:
this was really good. KEEP IT UP:)
 
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OnTheSurface said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 4:12 pm:
this is really good......keep at it. thanks for commenting on my article, 'Monster' :D
 
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