Throwing you away

February 21, 2010
By Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
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Like a drip of poison is how you spoke,
It sounded worse than a foul disease,
Your poison ran straight to my bleeding heart,
Like your fate was trying to hurt me,

Your venom sank deep into my veins,
Dissolving the unwanted nothing you had left,
The love that had washed from your red eyes of hatred…
Crushed my lungs as they screamed for your love,

Its time to forget you, my common sense reminds me,
I’ll throw you in the nearest dustbin, lock you in the nearest cage,
But our memories stop me from finishing my new mission,
I can’t completely discard you from my broken thoughts,

I’ll just shut you away in the back of my mind and throw away the key.


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on Sep. 6 2010 at 5:28 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

this is really great!!!! i love this!! you should write more so i can read your amazing stuff....

 

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CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 10:31 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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actually its my dream job.. i only wish it to come tru! and i loved all the comments thankyouuuuuu :)

Han15 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:20 pm
Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
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I've commented on all your work. Have you ever thought about a career in writing? I'd definately recommend it,

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 10:16 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Whoaaa... i love how this poem flows. its different somehow and your words are like fantastic check out my work sometime.... and good job i really really felt the emotion in it!!!

DaniW PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 3:38 pm
DaniW PLATINUM, New Bern, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out but when the darkness sets in their true beauty is revealed only if there is light from within.
By Elisabeth Kuebler-Ross

Wow! You write so well! :) You can read and actually feel the poem

Achery323 said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 2:28 pm
I really like this! Extremely well written, and i'm not sure if you meant to however one less line than a Sonnet could represent how you used to love them but withdrawn back from that feeling.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 10:28 am
GirlWithThePoems...x SILVER, Rugby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
look beyond the box that we hide in.

hey thanks for commenting my work. This is really emotion and deep.

well done :)

Han15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 1:17 am
Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
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Thanks, i have commented on your other work :)

Sabby SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:08 pm
Sabby SILVER, Cullman, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"Reading without reflecting is like eating without digesting." ~Edmund Burke

This is great :) So deep and well written. You really convey all of the feelings of the heart.

AMS123 said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 6:33 am
Brilliant. I wish I had written it myself!

Niknsspam said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 1:21 pm
Niknsspam, Raleigh, North Carolina
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This is very heartfelt and real. Very descriptive, which I love. BTW, thanks for commenting on my work!

Becky264 said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 12:13 pm
This is great! I like how the persons throwing away the key to forget someone in your poem. Very imaginative. Keep up the good work! :D

on Mar. 7 2010 at 3:19 am
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
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"everything happens for a a reason "

LOVEE iiT :)

on Mar. 4 2010 at 12:14 am
katiepickelsimer GOLD, Dededo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Throw your dreams into space like a kite, and you do not know what it will bring back, a new life, a new friend, a new love.

-Anais Nin

I like this poem! thank you for commenting on my work!

Rennie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 4:23 pm
Rennie BRONZE, Abbeville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
You only have one life, so don't mess it up.








-Logan (My little brother)

This is awesome! So much expression!!!!! Loved it!!!!

sugrstix said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 3:41 pm
Hey! Thanks for your comment! I really like this poem!

on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:31 pm
iloveparamore BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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\"dont rainon my parade\" \"i want to be his favorite hello&his hardest goodbye\"

this was really good. KEEP IT UP:)

on Mar. 2 2010 at 4:12 pm
sydneeharris16 DIAMOND, Auburn, Maine
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we the willing, lead by the unknowing, are doing the impossible for the ungrateful. we have done so much for so long with so little, we are now qualified to do anything with nothing.

this is really good......keep at it. thanks for commenting on my article, 'Monster' :D


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