February 21, 2010
Forget it. Don't come back here. My eyes are blurry against this heavy wind.
But i see who you are...the monster within. Don't try to change it. This is how i feel. I love you, or--i love who you used to be. This monster filled with the feeling of hate and betrayal--where did it come from? Was it stupid fight at a time that didn't really matter? But this monster isn't you.

So I'll put this gun down...if you do first. Thats a promise.

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Han15 said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 10:46 am
Wow! This is really good, keep writing!
Please rate my work or comment :)
OnTheSurface This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 4:14 pm
thanks! this took me forever!
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