The Taste of a Heart Break

February 20, 2010
I ask myself what I did to deserve this type of punishment?

Can a heart still break even after it's already been lamently been broken?

"To what to have such an unfortunate feeling and no on eto hold ont to"

(love's unwritten sense of rejection)

"I love you but you are not mine to claim"

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syed954 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 8:10 pm
That was a great way to use quotations in a poem. I've always tried to incorporate quotations in my poems, but it's pretty difficult to do. You however, pulled it off.
syed954 replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 8:37 pm
Another one of my poems was just accepted today. Can you rate and comment it too? It's called "To an Innocent One."
olican16 said...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 5:26 pm

what does that l word mean in the 2nd line i tryed to look it up but it said no results for that word!!?? 



Anyway check out my work???


sisterscrestofthedeadend replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 2:07 am
"lamently" means to express grief for or about...
olican16 replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 8:18 am

o ok well good job!!

Check out my stuff??

Han15 said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 1:22 pm
I like this alot. Keep writing :)
Please rate and comment my work.
sisterscrestofthedeadend replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 10:19 pm
thank you very much Han15 what's the titles of some of your work?
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