The Taste of a Heart Break

February 20, 2010
sisterscrestofthedeadend BRONZE, Eloy, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"one thing love cannot and can never be of is unsure"
"never regert what once made you smile"
"Your heart falls in love with who it falls in love with"
"To what have such an unfortuante feeling and no one to hold on to"


I ask myself what I did to deserve this type of punishment?

Can a heart still break even after it's already been lamently been broken?

"To what to have such an unfortunate feeling and no on eto hold ont to"

(love's unwritten sense of rejection)

"I love you but you are not mine to claim"


The author's comments:
the poem was mostly about the feelings you may feel after being dumped and overall (what in the minds of teens) would a heartbreak taste like

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on Sep. 11 2010 at 8:18 am
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

o ok well good job!!

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on Sep. 11 2010 at 2:07 am
sisterscrestofthedeadend BRONZE, Eloy, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"one thing love cannot and can never be of is unsure"
"never regert what once made you smile"
"Your heart falls in love with who it falls in love with"
"To what have such an unfortuante feeling and no one to hold on to"

"lamently" means to express grief for or about...

syed954 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 8:37 pm
syed954 BRONZE, Coral Springs, Florida
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Another one of my poems was just accepted today. Can you rate and comment it too? It's called "To an Innocent One."

syed954 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 8:10 pm
syed954 BRONZE, Coral Springs, Florida
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That was a great way to use quotations in a poem. I've always tried to incorporate quotations in my poems, but it's pretty difficult to do. You however, pulled it off.

on Sep. 6 2010 at 5:26 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

what does that l word mean in the 2nd line i tryed to look it up but it said no results for that word!!?? 

 

 

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on Mar. 5 2010 at 10:19 pm
sisterscrestofthedeadend BRONZE, Eloy, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"one thing love cannot and can never be of is unsure"
"never regert what once made you smile"
"Your heart falls in love with who it falls in love with"
"To what have such an unfortuante feeling and no one to hold on to"

thank you very much Han15 what's the titles of some of your work?

Han15 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 1:22 pm
Han15 BRONZE, Doncaster, Other
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I like this alot. Keep writing :)

Please rate and comment my work.


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