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He laughs when I cry and it hurts!

February 20, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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He makes me cry .. if not everyday then every hour.. if not every hour then every mintue.. if not every mintue then every second.. if not every second then every moment!
He calls me his dear, and it kills me becuase I know thats a lie!
He laugh when I read what I've been trying to write for so long and call it a poem..
He whos suppose to give me hope and support gives me hate and with him I lose competely all my self confidence..
He whom you might all be thinking is my sweetheart, but he never was, he who You will never guess who it is.. Hurts me so bad..
He's the reason why Ive done so much without thinking!
He's why I give up before I even start becuase I know that he would never care..
He's what makes me wish I was dead before I tell or say a word..
He's why I am writing this.. Hes what makes me stay in bed for hours so I dont have to see him..
Hes what makes my heart tears apart becuase he makes fun of the way I talk!
Hes whom LAUGH at every good thing I do!
He takes my heart out of my chest while I watch him speechless!
Hes the one who laughs when I cry.. and it hurts!

© Shana G., Cross Plains, WI

The author's comments:
Please, respect my pain.. and try to relazie that some people might seem happy, while truely they are breaking apart!!
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"Sometimes the world tries ot knock it out of you. But I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." August Rush(2007)

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Shahed GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 11:39 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Aww this just made my day .. thank you and I sure will. Actually I just submitted more work this week, 3 poems, I hope you would like them. Thank you so much .. and Im sorry I just saw this comment .. Thank you! :)
BurnHem said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:19 pm
You're obvouisly a very very very talented girl! God has given you a gift PLEASE dont stop writing! Please post more work everyone is to read your wonderful great work! I honestly hope for more people to be as talented as you are it just makes my day when I read such great poems! again beyond great!
Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 1:33 am
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Thank you!  Yes, I believe so too..

 

shivasfire PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:00 pm
shivasfire PLATINUM, Ashland, Oregon
20 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will never let schooling interfere with my education." (-forgot who it's by though)
also "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace."-Jimi Hendrix

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i absolutely love this. and guarantee many of us can relate out there. . .
Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 4:01 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Yes I put so much into this..

thanks!

Kbuschan PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 8:56 am
Kbuschan PLATINUM, South Plainfield, New Jersey
25 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
Fall in love or fall in hate; Get inspired or be depressed; Ace a test or flunk a class; Make babies or make art; Speak the truth or lie and cheat; Dance on tables or sit in the corner; Life is divine chaos. Embrace it. Breathe. And enjoy the ride...

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A lot of emotion in this emotion

I love it :)

Shahed GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 12:50 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Thank you!
Shadows said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:47 am
This is deep and painful, I know how you feel and i give respect. :D
Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 10:04 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Well thanks for your honestyness, I totally feel you though, I like your screen name, like the great lebaness singer Fayrouz :))
NorthernWriter said...
on May. 28 2010 at 8:04 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

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Although the word choice wasn't fabulous or anything, I can really relate to this cause I have someone in my life like that...good job on that part! Good emotion!
Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 3:46 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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Thank you!! Im glad you like it! thank you so much for commenting really! Im looking forward to see more comments on the rest of my articles :) thank you Joseph!
Joseph123 PLATINUM said...
on May. 25 2010 at 2:20 pm
Joseph123 PLATINUM, Paris, Other
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Aww, it's such a beautiful poem. I'm so emotionally moved by this piece. And what's so moving is that it's so intimate, and the body of the poem moves on with such a smooth and powerful climax. So pretty :)
Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 9:39 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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You have no idea what it means when I see people posting great supportive comments! thank you for stoping by! Im glad you like it!
Sweatheart SILVER said...
on May. 9 2010 at 9:07 pm
Sweatheart SILVER, BPT, Connecticut
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I can do anything

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this poem was reallyt good you really have a gift in writng keep it up
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:03 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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thank you so much!!!!

Yes i do have new work Ill get them on here as soon as i can ;) .. thank you again!

AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 11:04 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

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You have a serious gift. I enjoy reading your poetry. It makes me think. Hope you have new stuff soon... I cant wait!
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:39 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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no its not about my dad.. and thanks! dont be sorry its not THAT bad lol .. but thnx
Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 5:39 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

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I didnt see you posted a comment.. but yea thats how it really is thou
noelleism PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 9:23 am
noelleism PLATINUM, Russellville, Alabama
24 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can not dwell on the past, and I will not live on what the future may hold, but yet take comfort and find perpose in the second yet to come.

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Is this about your dad? I'm sorry. :(...O It's good that you get your hurt feelings out of you. It's not healthy to keep them in. be strong. :)
jephte15 said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 10:22 pm
awwww this one is sad