To go or To stay

February 20, 2010
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To go or to stay
If I stay
I’ll just want to leave another day
But if I go
I will surely know
That when I leave
My parents will grieve
But if I remain
It would certainly be a strain
But I truly believe
By going I will achieve
To go
Or not to go
Either way I will lose
But I still have to choose.
A little confused
I feel as though I’ve been used.
Whether light
Or night
I will have to pick
Even though it’s a trick.
If I leave everything behind
I would have been unkind
But if I stay instead
I surely will be faced with dread.

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 5:30 pm
you have alot of talent captain. to rate or not to rate?....   -to rate.  (5 stars)
found_my_dream(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:59 am
i like this alot (: its really controversal and it describes our inner wars. keep writing, btw check out some of my stuff (; thanks
HUDAZ said...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 5:54 pm
Hi Amberrose. I am a true fan of your writing. It's so emotional and truely an amazing piece of work. Plz post more of your work. You go girl!
MR.EHT said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 1:55 pm
AmberRose replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 12:14 pm
thanks!!! :)
Supernova7 replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 8:42 pm

very good nice job:) plz comment on some of my work:)


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