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February 19, 2010
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You close your eyes on the soft, heavenly fluff under your head;
Fall fast asleep.
Envision me.
Whether I’m angry or happy,
Nightmare or perfect dream
I’m there.
And then right when you get used to me,
Right when you could soak into this perfect me…
You get up
I go away.
But then when I get lonely,
When the moon has risen and there’s no light left,
You come back and I appear.
And whenever you come back,
I will let you ride through fields of marigold,
Swim with the exotic fish of Poseidon,
Or fly with the golden winged creatures in a hidden palace.
And I will make sure your blood doesn’t spill,
And you don’t wake up sweating
Because then I wouldn’t be with you.
And then you wouldn’t be able to just dream.

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Sallysunsine:-) said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 9:01 pm
like i was saying this peom reminds me of an alarm clock you now what i mean????????? and even you dont i luv how you put the BEEP!!!!!! on there it was hard to figure out so i asked my professor form my college that i attend becauswe im in college you no at BGSU Firelands, Ohio  did you no its located in frielands OHIO????? isnt taht cool and guess what i go to college there btw you wrightings inspire me soooo much but even though im in college(at BGSU which is in firelands which is in ohi... (more »)
Hippie_Runner replied...
Apr. 3, 2010 at 3:35 pm
yes, the beeps were alarm clocks, and thank you SO much for commenting!! :)
βίωσις said...
Mar. 25, 2010 at 9:51 am
Interesting soliloquy.
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 25, 2010 at 5:01 pm
who is this, hippie runner?
Hippie_H.A.M.? said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:26 pm
hi guys it would be really nice if you read this and commented on it whether you thought it was bad or good or whatever to see where im going in this writing! thanks!
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 5:05 pm
here i am!! commenting! again~~just wondering where the heck these good ideas just float into your head. 5 stars again!!
Hippie_H.A.M.? replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 5:55 pm
thanks sarbear! your encouragment is very...encouraging! its good to know that people that write good poems and stories like yourself also love other ones too!!! :)
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