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February 19, 2010
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You close your eyes on the soft, heavenly fluff under your head;
Fall fast asleep.
Envision me.
Whether I’m angry or happy,
Nightmare or perfect dream
I’m there.
And then right when you get used to me,
Right when you could soak into this perfect me…
You get up
I go away.
But then when I get lonely,
When the moon has risen and there’s no light left,
You come back and I appear.
And whenever you come back,
I will let you ride through fields of marigold,
Swim with the exotic fish of Poseidon,
Or fly with the golden winged creatures in a hidden palace.
And I will make sure your blood doesn’t spill,
And you don’t wake up sweating
Because then I wouldn’t be with you.
And then you wouldn’t be able to just dream.

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SkyAzure said...
May 7, 2014 at 4:23 am
I am left speechless, simply beautiful! :)
Tiara_Lovee said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 8:28 am
Right when your in the middle of a dream you get woken up to go to school. But its like you can picture it life it real life. I love this poem.
TraeBryant said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 8:16 am
This is so true. Right when im in the middle of an amazing dream i always wake up right before the best part is about to happen. 
CameronCox said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:43 am
This poem gives me the images of the places it is at in my head with such detail. I feel like I am in a dream floating around seeing all of this. This poem was really vivid and imaginative, I really liked it.
RyanTorres said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:24 am
It kind of sounds like your talking about a heart but the gain you always have your hesart with you
julywinters1226 said...
Sept. 2, 2012 at 10:49 pm
nice.I really like the use om imagery.keep up the good work.check out my work if you can.:)
IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 6:28 pm

I love dreams, one of the reasons why im one of the few kids who like to go to sleep at night. i love this poem!!!! way to write...

ps. please check out my work, id appreciate it!!! =D

crushed_veneer said...
May 17, 2012 at 3:52 pm
Love this, really different and you created amazing imagery :)
lucasloveswriting said...
May 2, 2012 at 12:54 pm
really intresting and unique. i love it :)
HappySappy replied...
May 2, 2012 at 8:07 pm
Thank you! :)
lucasloveswriting replied...
May 2, 2012 at 8:40 pm
your so welcome :P
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2012 at 8:16 pm
I read this again for the first time in about a year and I appreciate it even more. The ending sentences are really great and I love your use of vivid words (Ex: marigold...)to help us envision the dream. This has been marked exceptional by the ediorial staff, huh? On the way to a publishing I hope!
HappySappy replied...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 5:54 pm
I hope so too :) thanks!
Dreams Will Come said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 11:27 pm
This Poem To Me Is The Best Poem Ii Have Ever Read Im Doin Mii Project On This Poem It Inspired Me To Doing Mii Project On It So Im Thinking Uu For Writing This Poem ..
HappySappy replied...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 5:52 pm
Well thank you for reading it :)
Pandaluva said...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 4:05 pm

Dear Hippie_Runner,
     I absolutly love your work you know you can turn in imposters like Ali? Well you can and they will go to jail good luck getting into the magazine, but have fun while doing it! Hopefully, you will wright another impressive poem.



Hippie_Runner replied...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 10:03 pm

thanks you pandaluva! and as soon as i get more inspiration to write a poem ill send it in!


Sallysunsine:-) said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 11:19 am
welcome any time i love your wright i do not wright poems but i do wright fictional stories
Hippie_Runner replied...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 11:25 am
ali you! you!!! you!! thanks for getting my hopes up... and your not in college either!
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 5:56 pm
its not ali...
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