"Kiss"

February 19, 2010
By HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.

An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.


He moves toward me,
Almost sprinting just to get to me.
And then when he is finally right beside me,
He leans over,
Lips pursed,
Body sweating,
Eyes closed,
Mind blank.
And angels reach my own lips.
They are laughing and tickling me.
They are kissing me as if I had just died,
And it was the only was to get accepted into Heaven.
Now I open my eyes.
He is there with his perfect lips touching mine.
He was those angels.
He is an angel.
We part,
Look away shyly.
A flicker of the eyes,
And I can just tell there is love in those mysterious deep waters.
His love is pumping through his veins.
And then through mine.
We are now one.


The author's comments:
I have never kissed anyone ever so is this poem realistic??

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 8 2012 at 8:22 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Aww this is adorable! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks! 

on Apr. 3 2011 at 8:36 pm
Lola_Sveroski, Manschef, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I am an author. Normal was out of the question by the age of three.

And now that I /do/ know, I'd say yes, realistic.

on Apr. 23 2010 at 11:50 am
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
14 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral"
"Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart"
"If we can't be happy, maybe we shouldn't be together"
"Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me"

I love your poem :) its so sweet

 

i wish it was like that for me lol that woulda been so nice. instead, i didnt know what i was doing and my bf slobbered on my chin lol embarrasing to the max lol


Escaped GOLD said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 2:31 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
19 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

Lovely9:..xoxo

on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:49 pm
it was amazing btw i luv your wrighting style it really inspires me to findmy true luv thank you very much without you i would be nothing

on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:06 pm
GreenGirl13 SILVER, Groveland, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is our choices that made us who we are, far beyond our abilities.

This is sweet, but I cannot say if it was realistic or not. PLEASE ckeck out my work, as well.

on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:42 pm
HappySappy SILVER, Berlin Heights, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality.

An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind.

thanks! and ill look at your stuff too!

on Mar. 20 2010 at 6:01 pm
AlyssaFama SILVER, Kunkletown, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people want to be the sun that brightens your day. I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hour.

this was so amazing! something everyone can relate to at least one time in their life. check out some of my stuff too

on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:12 pm
Lola_Sveroski, Manschef, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am an author. Normal was out of the question by the age of three.

Loved it... I would say realistic... not that I would know.

Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 5:02 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
10 articles 4 photos 489 comments

Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

heyy y didn't you ever show me this poem? ITS GOOD!!!! hey i got my copy of the magazine today so im taking it to the pop trip so you and everybody else can see it!! anyway, this IS realistic

xD


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