February 19, 2010
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He moves toward me,
Almost sprinting just to get to me.
And then when he is finally right beside me,
He leans over,
Lips pursed,
Body sweating,
Eyes closed,
Mind blank.
And angels reach my own lips.
They are laughing and tickling me.
They are kissing me as if I had just died,
And it was the only was to get accepted into Heaven.
Now I open my eyes.
He is there with his perfect lips touching mine.
He was those angels.
He is an angel.
We part,
Look away shyly.
A flicker of the eyes,
And I can just tell there is love in those mysterious deep waters.
His love is pumping through his veins.
And then through mine.
We are now one.

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so_joy said...
Sept. 8, 2012 at 8:22 pm
Aww this is adorable! Great job! Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks! 
AuroraAnne said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 11:50 am

I love your poem :) its so sweet


i wish it was like that for me lol that woulda been so nice. instead, i didnt know what i was doing and my bf slobbered on my chin lol embarrasing to the max lol

Sallysunsine:-) said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 8:49 pm
it was amazing btw i luv your wrighting style it really inspires me to findmy true luv thank you very much without you i would be nothing
GreenGirl13 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 8:06 pm
This is sweet, but I cannot say if it was realistic or not. PLEASE ckeck out my work, as well.
citylightsgirl93 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:01 pm
this was so amazing! something everyone can relate to at least one time in their life. check out some of my stuff too
Hippie_Runner replied...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:42 pm
thanks! and ill look at your stuff too!
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 5:02 pm
heyy y didn't you ever show me this poem? ITS GOOD!!!! hey i got my copy of the magazine today so im taking it to the pop trip so you and everybody else can see it!! anyway, this IS realistic
Lola_Sveroski replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:12 pm
Loved it... I would say realistic... not that I would know.
Escaped replied...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 2:31 pm
Lola_Sveroski replied...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 8:36 pm
And now that I /do/ know, I'd say yes, realistic.
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