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If perfection took a human form,
I'm sure it would be his.
With lips like nitrous oxide,
leave me crazy when we kiss.
An embrace just like a freight train,
knock the breath right out of me
and keep me always wanting more,
his touch a neccesity.
And if the stars could melt down-
fall, graceful, from the skies-
made golden in the sunlight, those stars would be his eyes.





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Hippie_Runner said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 5:39 pm
wow when i read this one word came to mind: true love. the metaphors of this are FANTASTIC and the imagery is WOW! keep up the awesome work! im looking forward to reading more of your work!
 
meganiscooler This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 5:52 pm
thank you thank you thank you!
 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 5:31 pm
wow, i've been looking on this website at the poems that come after mine and some of the ones that my friends wrote. and you know what? this is the best one i've heard yet. i'm giving this 5 stars and im thinking about adding it to my favs. it rhymed w/o sounding corny and i didn't think it was cliche, it described how you feel and i thought it was very clever. loved it!! keep writing and check out my poems too!!
 
meganiscooler This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 7:46 pm
thank you so much! I'll be sure to check out yours, too
 
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