If I could.......

February 18, 2010
I sat playing my guitar.
Board.
I sat waiting....
Waiting for some one I really diden't know.
I wanted to move on....
But the way he left me was cold ,unintentional.
Why did I want someone soo badly I knew I coulden't have.
I had allways planed on telling him how I felt.
Then I found out my best friend liked him too but the funny part is...we diden't fight over him like people do on TV ,or in the novel you're reading.
I still sit here and imagine what I would tell him.
But I would be scared.
When it came down too it I would never say somthing witty and walk away.
If I loved him soo much why not?
When I think about it...
would I tell him about the "secret" world , My friend and I made up around him. Would I tell him our nickname for him was Noah? Today I would but ,what about Last week? Would I have told him then?
There was no closure...
So is that what I need closure?
If I could talk to him one last time what would I say?
"I love you" or better " I loved you" no, no I woulden't.
I would ask him simply " Whats up?"If it came to me ,and as he will walk away I will call his name and I would say " Do you remeber my friend Noah..I don't know how to say this you are Noah," I would walk away faster than he could catch me, I would leave him Hanging......Why?





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thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 6:29 pm
this is really good! i love how you end it with "...why?" it made your poem really strong. thx for reviewing my poem! i really liked yours. keep writing! (:
 
Ally25 replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 3:09 pm
Thanks...you just made my day:)
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 4:40 pm
no problem at all! i love reading people's works. tell me if you have anything else you'd like to read. i'd love to! (:
 
Ally25 replied...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 1:16 pm
I don't know it depends what you like.... i have a bunch of chezzy romance stuff and one review and also one called dreaming...so yeah
 
elfiewrites said...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 8:14 pm
I really liked your writing style! Excellent work! Please keep on writing. Please, if you get the chance, may you please comment on my new article "Is There Reason?" Much appreciated. Excellent work! Keep on writing
 
Ally25 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 3:17 pm
Yeah I will totaly read your work!
 
Rosalie said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 3:23 am

i like ur style of writing!

keep writing! 5 stars!

 
Ally25 replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Wow thanks alot... I wasn't sure if anyone would like it but thanks. I just started writing a story with alternating points of veiw...so I'm verry happy.
 
citylightsgirl93 said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 9:22 pm
this was very good! keep writing and check out some of my work
 
Ally25 replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 3:21 pm
Thanx... I'll take a look at your work!
 
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