February 18, 2010
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I stand before you,
Covered with my sins.
I've tried reaching out,
But no-one will listen;
No-one will care.
And yet here you are,
Standing in front of me,
Willing to care;
Willing to help.
You reach out to me,
And remove my shirt.
For each article of clothing you remove,
You remove my sins as well.

I stand before you now,
Cleansed of my impurities.
You draw me close,
And rekindle my dead soul.
As you step back,
It glows a brilliant white.
I look at myself,
At what you've done,
And my heart is filled with joy;
A joy that I have never felt before.
Tears fall from my eyes -
The joy in my heart overflowing.
You offer me your hand and I take it,
Glad that I am now purified.

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megarie said...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:52 pm
Please keep writing!!!!!
Sferron said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:26 pm
This was, like, amazing. It really was. Please keep writing ^.^
pyropoet replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:29 pm
thanks for commenting! it means a lot that you liked it! btw- i will keep writing - i just can't stop! lol :)
Sferron replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:33 pm
I know! hah same here. I love to write, I'm actually writing my own book. And no problem!
pyropoet replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:35 pm
really?!? me too! i just love writing - its like i can be myself on paper when i cant be in public, you know?
Sferron replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:37 pm
Exactly! ever since i've started writing, i've been like more myself. I feel better about myself. It weird but i love it :) haha.
pyropoet replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:38 pm
i know its weird, but its a good kind of weird.
Hey! are there any of your works that i could take a look at?
Sferron replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:40 pm
Yeah actually. haha. I'd love for you to look at them. I started writing a month ago, so im sorta new. haha but i fell in love with writing when the idea popped in my head. but that would be great :)
pyropoet replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:41 pm
cool! ill take a look at 'em! :)
Sferron replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:45 pm
haha thank you!
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