Point Of View Poems

February 21, 2010
By Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
33 articles 4 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a a reason "


the victim's viewpoint
"stop fighting" i kept yelling
it flies across da room
i dont notice
where did everything go?
i'm on the floor
they're all screaming
they're all crying
dont f33l bad
im alright
dont be sad
its not ypur fault
i just hope you didnt mean to
HELP!!
Its me!(in pain)

the bystanders viewpoint
she missed me
but not me
should i thank him
or forget him?
hes hit, on the floor
let me look once more
theres nothing i can do
this has nothing to do with me
its all her fult
and NOW she decides to cry
nd b sorry
i didnt do nything
im going to stay the same

the perpetrators viewpoint
OMG! what i do?
OMG! i didnt mean to
hes in pain
its all my fault
not much i can do
OMG! i did da
i caused him severe pain
ME!!
im sorry!

the upstanders viewpoint
call someone!
tell somebody!
something needs to be done
ill get the phone
ill help out
i dont want this to keep on
thats my blood
its my pain too
911 here i come!


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on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:55 pm
Natherine PLATINUM, Lawrence, Massachusetts
33 articles 4 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything happens for a a reason "

thank yuh :)

Laur♥ SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 9:29 pm
Laur♥ SILVER, Austin, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a cut. In time the pain will heal but the scar will be there forever.

I absolutely LOVE this. It is my absolute favorite one I've seen yet.


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