My Ending

February 4, 2010
By SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
SlamminMan GOLD, Sandown, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest no matter what the stakes are.

As I sit here,
I fall apart.
My body goes to sleep.
It zones out.
Nothing about me lives.
I decay on the inside.
Die slowly.
Like leaves on a brown fall floor.
Except I am not beautiful,
Nor graceful,
As I fall apart.

My eyes don’t see,
My ears don’t hear.
Just leave me.
The only thing that works,
Is feeling.
And I wish it would go.

I want to fall into nothing.
Because nothing is better than something.
Better than this.
I know longer wish for anything.
I wish for nothingness.
Death cold hard black.
This hurt I feel burns,
While nothing happens to my body.

As I sit,
I hold my tears.
They can’t come show.
Because no one may know,
While I sit.

The author's comments:
I've have been going through allot of rough times at home and school and the stress of homework and wrestling everyday and I just feel like death is a comfort almost and this piece helped my muddle through and now I'm happy to say that I got my life out in words.

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mask456 GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 5:43 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

I love howe this poem just flows along! I fell you speaking throught this, and i completely understand!! I love this piece! It threads the feelings of your mind so wonderfully! please comment on my work!

on Jul. 12 2010 at 6:56 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Great style in this poem, sad and meaningful, it looks almost like a drifting leaf.  Beautiful.


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