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Thanks alot, I had fun

You seemed so perfect,
If not clear to me,
How perfection,
Should look or be.
I seemed so lucky,
Happy to be yours.
Besides the fight;
Of my friends of war.
You said you loved me
I believed it too.
Ain’t it funny?
What love can do?
Bring together,
And break apart,
Never mind;
My lonely broken heart.
It came so slowly,
Ended too fast
Letting the feelings,
Accumulate,
Amass.
We fell and crashed,
Or burned shall I say,
You must have thought this was all child’s play
But,
We ended,
You needed,
You ended it all;
Now tell me love
Was it worth it all?




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Afanen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 8:51 pm:
This was quite lovely. I thought your rhyme scheme was good to; in my opinion they can seem contrived, but yours was very natural.
 
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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 17, 2010 at 5:00 pm:
Wow, I really like this.  Very relatable yet your style is unique.
 
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