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My Goodbye to Him

February 4, 2010
By alexthechaun GOLD, Morgan Hill, California
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I was wrong and selfish. I know see the way he looks at her,with his smile, and his great blue eyes shining. I don't deserve a boy like him, and he deserves better, like her.
Now I take in a deep breath, remembering all the times we shared, and slowly let it out, letting go of thouse few memories, but I can't and instead sit down and watch the world go by, and mine come crashing down.
If I could say any more words to him the only one would be goodbye, but I can't for fear i shall cry.

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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It's one of my best pieces I've written. Everyone at my school loved it even when I thought it wasn't that good...what do you think?
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