The hurt.

February 4, 2010
She thought she was strong,
but she can see she was wrong.

Everyday she can feel the hurt,
It's starting to make her more alert.

Can she do this though?
She sure hopes so.

She's done with the tears,
and she's pushing aside her fears.

It's time for her to make her stand,
you can tell by her shaking hand.

She's relieved when it's off her chest,
but now it's time for her to rest.

Her poem is read as she sleeps,
Their love goes out to her as everyone weeps.





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Ally25 said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 10:07 am
This is very good usaly emotion isnt esaily felt in third person but you did a good job. Keep writing:)
 
beverly replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 8:19 am
for me it's not that hard to use. but thank you & i will. :)
 
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