Better Days

February 4, 2010
I have seen better days
when there were no clouds in the sky,
ad there was a summer breeze to help birds fly;
when moments of happiness were not so far spaced,
and life still had that sweet taste;
when I had no cares,
and I knew nothing of fear;
Yes. I have seen better days.





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#1Swimmer said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 8:42 pm
i only see one accidental mistake in this poem on the third line you wrote ad instead of and, but i knew what you were saying and mistakes happen! i make them all the time!!=] i thought this poem was deep. i wish i could say more, but instead of chopping it to pieces i'll just go with the flow and say i loved it! mind if i add it to my favorties?
 
jejouegenius replied...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 1:42 pm
ha please add it to your favorites
 
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