Paradise Within a World

February 18, 2010
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In a world that I strive to be set free
In a world that I want to spread my wings
In a world that chaos walks among us


The key to heaven
The keyhole that keeps it protected
A pen and a notebook
My paradise


Inspiration flows like a river on the mountains
The feeling of fulfillment rises like the sun
Light overshadows darkness
Whispers of wisdom are spoken

I exist in one world
But I live within another
Which lets me be or not to be
Who I am

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sunnyhunny This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 19, 2010 at 2:57 pm

Very expressive and relatable.  I really like this!


wpalacio said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 12:54 pm
I like your poems allot and i am not one read many poems >>>>> love you sis
BeatrizHD said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 9:48 am
I can't think of any poem I've read that I can relate to more than this
G.J.Velez said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 5:10 pm
A true look at the mind of a wise person. Great poem
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