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It's only me.
You're not real,
This is only a dream.
Sometimes I wish I could wake up,
I know you wouldn't be there
Sitting beside me.
It's only me.
I'm awake
while I'm asleep.
I see you all the time,
but I know you're not real
And you'll never be.
It's only me.
So much time
spent alone in the dark,
no one real to talk to here,
everyone else is just a dream.
Yes, that includes you.
It's only me,
Forever,
Without anyone else.
Sometimes I wish that you were real,
But that is not possible,
So unrealistic.
It's only me.
Just waiting
To wake up from this dream
That's when you dissapear.
I am the only one that's real,
In this world of dreams.



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zhlenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
This is really good, I'd like it better if you added more imagery and feelings in there, but that's just my personal opinion. Please check out my work, December and Play on Words.
 
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Ebony_Rose said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 2:58 pm:

Thanks :D if you have any ideas about anything I can write about I need something, I feel like writing but I've had intense writers block lately :/

 

 
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HeronHero said...
May 5, 2010 at 1:21 pm:
This is fantastic, haunting and beautiful!:) I relate to it completly! Excellent job!!!
 
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