The End

February 18, 2010
I asked for freedom
I asked for trust
I needed a break
They thought I asked too much
They barricaded me in
Now I’m stuck with nothing
Only my cold numb skin
I’m dead and yet still dying
Where is my hope and who will save me now
Because they won’t let me save myself

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VampGirl61807 said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 4:32 pm
So moving and thought provoking!!!
RebeccaR This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 3:15 pm
yeah, urs are better though:) my dearest authoress divine lol
VampGirl61807 replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 7:43 pm
whatever you say hon at least yours have a different topic each time mine are (almost) all about love you really and truly actually have more talent than i could ever have
VampGirl61807 replied...
Apr. 5, 2010 at 6:21 pm

My two new ones are up!!

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