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A Closed Door

February 16, 2010
By polyprincess16 SILVER, Tracy, California
polyprincess16 SILVER, Tracy, California
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Favorite Quote:
No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. ~Eleanor Roosevelt


My heart keeps getting trampled on
Stomped on without thought.
I open the door to my heart
And let him in.
The door swings open
Before he even knocks
I readily give him the key
To my heart on a silver platter
He takes it and runs before
I even realize what I've done.
I leave open the window to my heart
So I can hear his voice
Calling out to me
But all I get is
A cold, icy rain pouring in.
Silence fills my heart
Now I've locked up my heart
And I don't know if anyone
Can break down the
Brick wall that has replaced
That once welcoming door.



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on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:46 pm
Kaylarebekah131719 PLATINUM, McDonough, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
*(ending to Faith) I told myself that, if I avoided him at all costs, I'd be okay; so I did, and I was, and he never game back.
* More than we rely on other people, we rely on other peoples ignorance.
*Just a little thank you, to all the morons that led me to learning to write well; you are the razors of the pen that draws the blood I write with. I owe it all to your mistakes.

Very well done! I love it!

ugogosaur said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:26 pm
that really touch me,

you used great imagery.

i could picture out the things you say.

that was inspirational [ :