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Through the history of the world,
Swords struck shields and spears were hurled,
Many have fought and many have died,
Among the horrible, bloody tide.

And before the time of spears and shields,
Before the rows of bloody fields,
Were sharpened sticks and a jagged rock,
Ever since we have learned to walk

War was the same, no matter when,
It happens now and it will again,
It happens to us, it will for our kin,
War claims life with an evil grin.

We try to stop it with all our might,
But no one can ever stop the fight,
The time between, it always ranges,
But War…

War never changes.





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Whylime said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 3:09 pm
very good and true. i get so angry when political figures are like, "yah, ima go and make peace! and then im gonna stop all the wars!" And i think are you a reincarnated god or something? because if you're not.. well then i dont think you're goin to get much progress. but yeah, haha the comment sounded wierd.. *deep breath* im a bit opinionated!SIMON COWELL CRITIQUE:  it didnt flow very well in the second paragraph: "And before the time of spears and shields, before the rows of bloody ... (more »)
 
Whylime replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 3:11 pm
oh wait i just reread that and I was wrong... never mind. i think i thought that it didnt flow cuz i read it too fast 
 
TimBonin replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 6:49 pm
even if it wasnt a mistake, no harm done. I enjoy being critiqued about my work both positively and negatively. Also if you liked my poem, feel free to pass the link around
 
believer16 said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 6:57 pm
i really enjoyed that. and it rings a certain truth. i just joined today and hope that when my poems get accepted to the website people will check them out.
 
Ariel W. said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 3:33 pm
That was pretty good
 
Rennie said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 12:29 pm
Wow that's really good I like it a lot:) If you guys get a chance please check out my poem. My mom is the only one that commented on it lol! THANKS!
 
sara_bakri said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 1:04 pm
i really like this and this poem is true
 
Khary Da Writer said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 2:18 pm
This is good stuff bro, ...good shit ...lol....u got talent
 
TimBonin replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 10:52 pm
thanks, spread this around if you can i would like to see what others think
 
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