Near Death

February 16, 2010
I sit in class
and think about you.
I love you
with all I have.
My heart
has been broken.
I wish
I wouldn't
have ever spoken.
The pain hurts,
and I want it
to go away.
My heart portrays
each feeling I have.
You are my all,
and my love constitutes
the way I feel.
You can't believe
I would actually cry.
My eyes hurt,
and my heart burns.
I've fallen
for you bad-boy type,
and I don't want
to see any light.
I want
to be in
total darkness.
I love you,
and I can't harness
my love for you.
Give my heart back...
Please! I love you!!
My baby... I do!!!
I want you back.
My heart aches,
and you come to mind.
I need to be loved.
You're my love,
but I'm not yours.
You don't love me.
Give me
what I need.
A love with heed.
you;re not coming
to relieve me
of a hurt heart.
Why don't I
go somewhere
and DIE!!!

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:23 pm
Um... I thought it was slightly bizarre and disoriented. Like the words to a goth punk songs instead of a flowing poem. On the other hand, I had read some of your other poems and they are fabulous. Obviously you have talent as proof in those.
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 8:40 am
Thanks.... Honestly, I wrote this when I was in a slightly bizarre moment...Like when you are raging with anger and it seems like no one cares about you...when you only want to be yourself... But thanks.. bunches =)
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