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LOVE At The Battle Field

February 16, 2010
By nooxygen PLATINUM, Medford, New York
nooxygen PLATINUM, Medford, New York
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Favorite Quote:
the mirror only tells half the story, beauty is found on the inside...
love is blind
only the shadow knows
words said in the heat of anger are never from the heart


If loves a battle field,
Then I’m losing,
Big time.
And its time for me to retreat.
But they say all is fair
In love and war.
But its not.
Because
As usual
The pretty, popular girls
get the handsome popular guys,
And those types of guys
Don’t give average low life’s one glance of interest.
Unless your mad pretty
Or you have an awesome personality,
Prepare to watch your
heart get broken in two.
So what’s more painful?
Someone gauging your eyes out
Or watching your love,
Love someone else?
Its eternal pain,
You have to swallow,
You have to fight,
Alone.
I’m tasting hot, thick, salty, liquid,
In my mouth,
All this love talk
Is making me bite my tongue off!
Ugh!
Love is so overrated,
So cliché,
So spontaneous and cumbersome.
Love is so…
So…
Beautiful. Yes, beautiful.
Love is for the lucky ones.
So you get the picture?
Love is not always fair,
In love and war,
Because if its fair,
How come I’m retreating?


The author's comments:
"what i wrote.
is the truth."
-nooxygen

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on Feb. 25 2010 at 1:52 pm
nooxygen PLATINUM, Medford, New York
49 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
the mirror only tells half the story, beauty is found on the inside...
love is blind
only the shadow knows
words said in the heat of anger are never from the heart

thanx=]

i will =)

paige. :) said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 1:18 pm
this is really good!

im loving it.

:)

keep writing!

:)