Aluminum Floor

February 10, 2010
By SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great
You just need to find the strength.*-Me

You can't just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me


She sits
Sits on her bathroom floor
The cold aluminum
She hopes,
Might help numb the pain,
But it dosn't,
Dosn't go away
She's left crying,
And at the same time,

Dreams of the perfect life,

That could be.



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on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:35 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great
You just need to find the strength.*-Me

You can't just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

alright! haha i will

on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:00 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.
-L. Kimpton

hey! dont be sorry! its what drives my poems, my writing.

ive never been good at writing about my surroundings (im mostly emotional), but i would love to see some of your work if you choose to post it!

on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:56 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great
You just need to find the strength.*-Me

You can't just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

It makes perfect sense. And I have the ability to take what's around me and put it in words. A lot of my work that i havn't put up yet is based on my surroundings. and thank you (: And im sorry for what your feeling ):

on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:51 pm
pyropoet DIAMOND, Zimmerman, Minnesota
71 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
You are NEVER alone in your troubles - there is someone who is always willing to lend a hand or a shoulder to you.
-L. Kimpton

this...this is full of emotion (at least to me). im not sure if this is something you've felt personally, but it is something that i've felt. i guess that's why we have the ability to write - to let out the pain, the sadness, all of our emotions. i really like the flow of this one - it really connects to the reader, if that makes sense.

on Mar. 2 2010 at 7:17 pm
SimplySloan PLATINUM, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 11 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
You have the ability to be great
You just need to find the strength.*-Me

You can't just wish for happiness and magically receive it, you have to do something for yourself, to feel it.*-Me

Hah. You're silly. =P

on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:46 pm
choirofangels BRONZE, Downingtown, Pennsylvania
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ahhh thats the one i helped with!!! haha :) btw stalonee its tori if you havent noticed by my erm...amazingnesss :)


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