Almost

February 10, 2010
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I think back now,
to the things you did to me












Was it really worth it?











I guess we’ll have to see.

You first said you loved me.
I thought we were perfect together.
Those were the best years of my life,
I thought you really loved me, Heather.

We had some really great times,
Then you go and cheat.
We’ve permanently destroyed,
I have finally been beat.

I hope I never see you,
Your not worth a thing.
You never told me goodbye,
I’m glad I kept the ring.





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me-forever said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 1:51 am
you don't need help of all things u need a bronze medal this was good as well as your other poems i have read and iw as wondering about the spaces as well i thought u ment somthing by it but i guess not but 1 thing i do want to advice is u need more passion in it it seems a little bland but still a good poem keep on writting :)
 
Poet4ever replied...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 4:12 pm
i will put some of my more recent stuff on sooner, this was written two years ago, and so wre the others
 
Poet4ever said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:03 pm
Anyway, please help me, critizing constructively or complementing. I really need it. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Poet4ever said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:45 pm
Why are some of the lines in my poem changed. and whay are there such big spaces?
 
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