A Deadly Friendship

February 9, 2010
By Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who don't know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were"
"I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn't either"


I stand in the rain though the water is cold
This pain is to much for me to behold
Your screams go out into the silent night
I am sorry i gave you such a terrible fright
But you were going to leave me all on my own
And you were all i had as a strong backbone
So now i have found a way to be together
Because if we both die you can't leave me ever


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece while i was in my creative writing class, i was thinking of my best friend and i wondered how i would feel with out her. So i took my own feelings as sorrow and made them more extreame to compleat desperation for the charecter in the poem.

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on Mar. 4 2010 at 7:44 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who don't know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were"
"I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn't either"

this is not the one i changed

on Mar. 4 2010 at 6:52 pm
Dancer412 BRONZE, Greer, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Choice is the most holy act you can do. Everything in you life is made up of what you choose."

I love how you changed it abby!!!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:08 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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well may be I will change my mind. . . *ghostly sounds*

on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:06 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who don't know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were"
"I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn't either"

gee thanks...i am glad you are not going to kill me

on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:03 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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You are very talented. . . I am not going to show up at your doorstep and kill you. Write more poems. . .so the world can see how great of a poet you are. . .and how undead you are. . .so if will excuse me I am going to find some crappy poet and stab them to death. . . just kidding I actually am a normal (relative term) person. . . so good bye

on Feb. 27 2010 at 8:00 pm
annA ecarG nosdrahciR, East Of No Where, South Carolina
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I am sorry so I am going to comment :-)

on Feb. 27 2010 at 4:37 pm
Marina303 SILVER, Greer, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who don't know me think i am quiet, the people who do wish i were"
"I can only please one person per day, today is not your day...tomorrow probably isn't either"

i love how no body comments on the things i put...oh well


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