A Deadly Friendship

February 9, 2010
I stand in the rain though the water is cold
This pain is to much for me to behold
Your screams go out into the silent night
I am sorry i gave you such a terrible fright
But you were going to leave me all on my own
And you were all i had as a strong backbone
So now i have found a way to be together
Because if we both die you can't leave me ever





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Marina303 said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 7:44 pm
this is not the one i changed
 
AnnA ecarG N. said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:03 pm
You are very talented. . . I am not going to show up at your doorstep and kill you. Write more poems. . .so the world can see how great of a poet you are. . .and how undead you are. . .so if will excuse me I am going to find some crappy poet and stab them to death. . . just kidding I actually am a normal (relative term) person. . . so good bye
 
Marina303 replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:06 pm
gee thanks...i am glad you are not going to kill me
 
AnnA ecarG N. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:08 pm
well may be I will change my mind. . . *ghostly sounds*
 
Marina303 said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 4:37 pm
i love how no body comments on the things i put...oh well
 
AnnA ecarG N. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 8:00 pm
I am sorry so I am going to comment :-)
 
Dancer412 replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 6:52 pm
I love how you changed it abby!!!
 
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