February 9, 2010
One more time, one last story. How good will this one be? Another in my life , everytime it gets so dry. I cried, i asked. Am i being answered? Should i keep my gard up, or be free. Will it be a success or an express train to no where. No vivied map to guide me. I want it: Happyness, love, cared for, wanted. But no one will know but the two of us. Work it, effort, is what it will take to make our love string and succssed. For our love is a one of a kind. That no one can see.

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CSHCSH This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 26, 2010 at 6:35 am
hey, i think it's a great poem! keep on rocking and could you look at my poems too? i love your poem coz its so romantic and deep!
A_Dreamer said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 11:58 am
It's a good poem, just had a typo or two, but keep up writing! :)
GreenLover replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 12:36 pm
hahaha yes i saw it afterwards too
hbananabread93 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 9:15 pm
very good, keep it up
GreenLover replied...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 12:31 pm
thanks :)......
unique said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 12:41 pm
this is really touching. i can really relate to it. i know how she feel. vote for this poem to make it number 1
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