.:AGAIN:.

February 9, 2010
By GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number


One more time, one last story. How good will this one be? Another in my life , everytime it gets so dry. I cried, i asked. Am i being answered? Should i keep my gard up, or be free. Will it be a success or an express train to no where. No vivied map to guide me. I want it: Happyness, love, cared for, wanted. But no one will know but the two of us. Work it, effort, is what it will take to make our love string and succssed. For our love is a one of a kind. That no one can see.


The author's comments:
My insperation for ths poem is my boyfriend. i love him but iam scared i will get hurt again. but with the two of us trying in this relationship i know it will work.

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CSHCSH GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2010 at 6:35 am
CSHCSH GOLD, Jakarta, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody tries to change the world, but nobody tries to change themselves
-Leo Tolstoy

hey, i think it's a great poem! keep on rocking and could you look at my poems too? i love your poem coz its so romantic and deep!

on Mar. 11 2010 at 12:36 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

hahaha yes i saw it afterwards too

on Mar. 9 2010 at 11:58 am
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

It's a good poem, just had a typo or two, but keep up writing! :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 12:31 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

thanks :)......

on Mar. 6 2010 at 9:15 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
it is what it is
&&
dance like EVERYBODY is watching

very good, keep it up

unique said...
on Feb. 22 2010 at 12:41 pm
this is really touching. i can really relate to it. i know how she feel. vote for this poem to make it number 1


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