Eyes of Paradise MAG

By Elisha Laubacher, Canton, OH

We spoke,
and I soared,
we talked.

I met your smile
with my eyes
and looked into your eyes.
I saw

tropical waters infused with kiwi extract.
a blueberry garden bursting with
luscious fruits,
rimmed with a fence of
I saw Earth
as seen from the Moon.

I forgot words,
forgot I was more than a hummingbird
hovering above a rare plant.
intoxicated by you and your
sweet lethal nectar,

I looked in your eyes and
like a crayon,

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This article has 3 comments.

ninja alice said...
on Feb. 21 2009 at 1:36 am
this reminds me of a guy i like and man u got a gift of poetry

Moose said...
on Nov. 22 2008 at 8:39 am
This is amazing. I was really drawn in with this poem; it's beautiful.

Keep on writing :D

Tweedle Dee said...
on Oct. 27 2008 at 1:25 pm
i read one of your other ones before this, but this one is just as awesome!!! wow, i seriously love this!!!


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