February 15, 2010
Young and beautiful,
old and wise,
Gentle and naive.
Simple human traits.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Young may we be,
Beautiful are we,
Yet we have no wings to fly.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Old is the great,
Wise do we see,
Yet, no one is perfect.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Gentle is the mothers touch,
Naive is the newbie,
Yet, they know little more than we do.

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MaxRide said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 8:41 pm

so short, but so meaningful!

I love all your writing, you are very talented!

(oh, and if possible, can you check out my work?)

~Max <3

Leona95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 4:48 pm
This is amazing! The poem is so concise, but has so much meaning. I really love your work. You are a very talented writer. 
WRIT3R4LIF3 replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:11 pm
Thank you Leona95 so much.
elfiewrites said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 5:31 pm
Excellent! You are a very talented writer!!! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my article "Is There Reason?" Thanks very much. 
WRIT3R4LIF3 replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 3:10 pm

thank you elfiewrites. will do

(sorry it took me a while 2 respond i havent been on alot lately)

ZAVERY said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 4:46 pm
The thing I have to admit that I loved was the picture you chose. Very good choice. One thousand stars! * + 9,999 more stars.
WRIT3R4LIF3 replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thank you ZAVERY. I'm glad you enjoyed it :).
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