control over me

February 13, 2010
By Wallflower PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
Wallflower PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
If you aren't happy alone then you're not going to be happy with anyone else.

'please don't go'
he begged me to stay
lead me not into temptaion
but deliver us from evil
I hugged him goodbye
but he refused to let go
and now i'm trapped in a
basement full of cobwebs
just like the ones resting
on our love without a pulse.

The author's comments:
'tis probably deserved for answering his desperate whys with God as a justification

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on Jul. 12 2010 at 9:02 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow!! this is very powerful in such a short amount of lines!!! awesome job-i really enjoyed reading this!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)


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