control over me

February 13, 2010
'please don't go'
he begged me to stay
lead me not into temptaion
but deliver us from evil
I hugged him goodbye
but he refused to let go
and now i'm trapped in a
basement full of cobwebs
just like the ones resting
on our love without a pulse.

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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:02 pm
Wow!! this is very powerful in such a short amount of lines!!! awesome job-i really enjoyed reading this!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!:)
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