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February 13, 2010
I want to be with him
Right now
I liked feeling his warmth
The slowness of his breath
As he slept
The mellow that washed over me
That moment…
When we were playing
Like children
And he shoved his face in mine
Daring me to blink
I bite my lip
To keep myself from closing that little distance
Between us
Doing the unthinkable…
I wish he was here now
My thoughts are such a jumble
He calms me down…
Repeating it over and over again
And I melt inside…

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MRuffThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 2:10 am

I know the feeling!!! This, in my opinion is very beutifully written and gives me a calm, suddle, or even somber image in my head!! it kinda relaxes me you know? Anyway, keep the nice writing and I know for sure that you'll aprove! :)


megsloveslions said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 4:28 pm
Wow really good!  I totally know the feeling!  Please check out some of my work?
Natalie4ya said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 6:50 pm
dolphin13 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 5:41 pm
This is beautiful! I love it so much!
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