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I Am the Dawn of the Universe

February 12, 2010
By Anonymous

I am a frog bouncing along lily pads
I am the rain drizzling into the lovely pond
I am pink like a beautiful evening sky
I am round like a ball bouncing down the road
I am the ribbit you hear in the night
I am the musty smell of an old book
I am smooth as a stone from the beach
I am scared like when a predator approaches
I am a daughter of mother nature
I am the dawn of the universe



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k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 10:00 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

No problem :) and thanks 

lovevball said...
on May. 12 2010 at 8:50 pm
lovevball, Middletown, Maryland
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Thank you so much for the comment! Ill go check out some of your writings.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 7:09 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I really like this "anonymous" from Middletown, MD. I really really like this :) Keep writing and don't be afraid to claim your work, theres nothing wrong with a little feedback. Speaking of feedback, would you mind checking out some stuff i got posted so far, i'd like your opinion (good or bad).

Thanks <3