Battered and Betrayed

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Standing alone beside my own reflection, Looking into the tear filld eyes that stair back at me, I wish I was looking into your eyes instead, but you wont have that, heart filld with to much pain to bair, I dont know if i can go on, Your love has causd my death, you came by and swept me off my feet, flying free like a bird I was shot down into the dust and dirt of my grave, It takes two to love, but now the shadows are my only companion in this world of darkness, Shadows consume me, Shadows embrace me, Shadows please dont let me go...





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xLpoet said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:23 pm
It's a beautiful concept and it flows well. There a few typos I would consider revising, other than that-job well done. :)
 
breezly replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 7:45 am
thank you lol and im a very bad speller so yea typos are expected from me
 
Shali said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:26 pm
i love it and ur choice of words. :D
 
breezly replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:31 pm
THX SHAL!CAT ima cheek out some of ur work and leav u a comment
 
Ebony_Rose said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:02 pm
:) It's good in my opinion
 
breezly replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 9:14 pm
thank you very much
 
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