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I Cried A River

February 12, 2010
By Shali BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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Shali BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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I cried a river
I could not breathe

I cried a river
I fell into an unwakeable sleep

I cried a river
My heart stopped

I cried a river
My head's gunna pop

I cried a river
The tears covered the ground

I cried a river
I'm gunna drown

I cried a river
I think i'm done

I cried a river
My life is gone

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Shali BRONZE said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:40 pm
Shali BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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thanks! that means a lot!
breezly BRONZE said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:33 pm
breezly BRONZE, Apalachin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
one must first experiance the dark side of life before they can look at the light in full view.

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I love this poem so much! i can jest see the river of tears flowing almost
Shali BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:42 pm
Shali BRONZE, Vestal, New York
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thanks so much!
another_teenage_itiot PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 12:10 pm
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Favorite Quote:
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I like! its got a good rythem that kept me looped in. keep it up!