love and hate

February 5, 2010
If you love me
Show it

If you hate me
Tell me

Love and hate
Are very alike

They both require
The guts
To do something
Off of your feelings

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GreenGirl13 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 3:38 pm
This was really good. I liked how it was forwart and to the point, while still being a poem. I truly enjoy this style.
lostnhim said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 6:38 pm
I like it! And your right, it does certainly do well short. It says exactly what you neeed it to say, and is still a great poem! Keep writing, i love it!
jesusluvsus said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 11:34 am
i think for this subject it doesnt have to be very long it says wat it needs to say
blingblang4eva said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 9:47 pm
very short but good :0 i liek it ;)
Powd3er said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 11:44 am
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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