love and hate

This was really good. I liked how it was forwart and to the point, while still being a poem. I truly enjoy this style.

I like it! And your right, it does certainly do well short. It says exactly what you neeed it to say, and is still a great poem! Keep writing, i love it!

i think for this subject it doesnt have to be very long it says wat it needs to say

very short but good :0 i liek it ;)

This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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