Trust Me

February 5, 2010
By DayOwl BRONZE, Lorton, Virginia
DayOwl BRONZE, Lorton, Virginia
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Where’s the trust?
There hasn’t been a single lie.
Where’s the trust?
I’m actually pretty wise.
I’ll be on my own soon.
I’m almost eighteen.
I’ll be on my own soon.
I’m not a little tween.
Why won’t you listen?
Is it ever going to change?
Why won’t you listen?
I find it kind of strange.
If I’m stuck inside a house,
How can I become responsible?
If I’m stuck inside a house,
How will anything be possible?
What I ask of you is simple.
Just give me a chance.
What I ask of you is simple.
I want to be free to dance.
I can make it.
Just you wait and see.
I can make it.
I want you to be proud of me.
Don’t have any worries.
Don’t think about the maybe.
Don’t have any worries.
I’ll always be your baby.


The author's comments:
Inspired by an incident a friend of mine had with her mom.

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