Feeling

February 8, 2010
By carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
carolinesell PLATINUM, Cedar Falls, Iowa
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She can see
you standing still
waiting for her to pounce
She can hear
your heart beating faster and faster
She can smell
the sweat, your fear
She can almost taste
your cries
But she cannot feel
That is why she knows
nothing.
Without feeling, she has no
pain on the outside,
and without feeling
she cannot have emotions on the
inside.



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on Feb. 17 2010 at 2:32 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
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Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


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