Miss Seventeen

February 7, 2010
Miss Seventeen

Dear Miss Seventeen,

a year was the time that we were together
and the time we will be apart
I just wanted to ask
how have you been
since we've depart
you are always in my heart
was the sun the day we've met
remember having doubts about you yet

because of what people had been
things that are made up
they tell me that you are stuck up
they tell you are difficult and calculating
they tell me that I should never befriend a girl like you
and I would be the first replying
you are just a girl
with faults and flaws too
but with a bigger heart
than some others do
your special position
creates you unnecessary back stab and tension
but I will say
it is not what
you are
you are
a girls with hair dark as velvet
eyes sparkling
like my own little sunshine
in the coldest nights of Minnesota
not the chilly wind
only your package full of cards
can bring a tear to my eye
and wipe them away
just to replace it with a

: )
smiling as I call to you faraway
you are like my other kind of shadow
but solid
not near
but dear
I miss you
I love you
this is how it shall come to
no matter how many times our story has been interrupted
I am a part of you and you are a part of me
Miss Seventeen


YOURS forever and always will be

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grasslova said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 7:56 pm
WOW. amazing. Love the anadiplosis'. :D Keep up the great writing and fantastic sentance structure! I like the story you tell, it's heart wrenching, but I can relate.
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