I Remember

February 7, 2010
I remember our first date

I asked to kiss you

You said not yet

Just wait

I remember meeting your family

For the first time

I shook your dad’s hand


I remember going to the lake

Swinging on the bench

Ten long minutes of pure joy

I remember talking with you

On the phone

All threw the night

We fell asleep together

For the first time

I remember dancing with you

Leaning in close to your ear

And whispering

I love you

My knees were shaking

I remember arguing with you

For the dumbest reasons possible

I remember the long silences

Both of us wanting the other

To say sorry

To ask for forgiveness

I remember staring in your eyes

Wishing you’d change your mind

But you didn’t

You broke my heart

Destroyed our love

Left me to die

Alone with no one by my side

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Authorgal98 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 7:37 pm
The end was so heart breaking, i loved it
perceptive_soul said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 7:26 am
LOVE IT! this is quite amazing actually and i like the wording. it flows nice too....wow i sound like my english teacher.
beccasara12 said...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 3:30 pm
this is 1 of ure best.... actually i think ive been sayin that 4 the last 5... but ure really talented... keep it up!
MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 5:58 pm
I love how you can make the reader feel the pain. This is really inspiring. It's so real and everyone could relate to it sometime. I wanna write now. haha. AWESOMENESS! :D
LostAngel said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 4:20 pm
Again with the emotions, they are really seen in this poem as well
FashionGuru replied...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 5:07 pm
Wow, you just about broke my heart with this! Fantastic, i love the raw emotion and ...ahhh just great :))
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