What you saw in me

February 6, 2010
By JackVain SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
JackVain SILVER, Lubbock, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
I don't want to be needed...I need to be wanted...

You saw right through me
from the very start,
you saw I needed love
to mend my broken heart,
You saw the little girl
that I had thought had died long before,
you saw my pain
eating me away to my core,
you saw I was trapped in a cage
and I couldn't get away,
you saw my ways
of keeping everyone at bay,
You saw the bruises and scars
on my little torn heart,
you saw it all
with a glimpse that small.

The author's comments:
It was a poem i wrote for someone who could tell what i was feeling or trying to say just by looking at me

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