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Our Poor Dying Lily

February 6, 2010
By DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Our relationship

Is like a wilting lily.



I am the stem

eager and hoping

trying to hold us up.



And you are the petals

lazy and crushing

pushing and breaking me down.



Our relationship

is like a wilting lily.



I am the stem

you are the petals,

and I cry for our lily.



For our poor dying lily.



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on Feb. 21 2010 at 10:19 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the comment!!

on Feb. 18 2010 at 10:40 am
It's beautiful, it captures a dying relationship perfectly.


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