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I don't care what you call it.
It's still wrong.
You're still wrong.
I don't care what you claim.
It's still wrong.
You're still wrong.
I didn't mind when you whispered;
I didn't mind when you laughed;
About me;
At me.
'Cause you could do no wrong.
'Cause you would never hurt me:
I thought you cared too much.
Or maybe I cared too much;
About me;
About you.
But I was wrong.
I'm still wrong.
And that makes me sick.



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MarinaOreo said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 7:36 pm:
Hey there again!
This was really emotionally captivating. To me, it is very relate-able (especially when you said, "or maybe I cared too much".) It sounds just like me. Keep writing, it's really fantastic stuff you've got. :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 10:17 pm :
Hey again thanks again!! I'm so glad you could realte to this because I wanted girls to look at and think:that sounds lik something i would say. Thank you!
 
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chu-chi,!!! said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 10:24 am:
I love the way you write because it's different, but in a good way, so keep up the good work!
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 11:57 am :
Thank u sooooooooo much!!
 
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