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You Were Wrong

February 6, 2010
By DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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I don't care what you call it.
It's still wrong.
You're still wrong.
I don't care what you claim.
It's still wrong.
You're still wrong.
I didn't mind when you whispered;
I didn't mind when you laughed;
About me;
At me.
'Cause you could do no wrong.
'Cause you would never hurt me:
I thought you cared too much.
Or maybe I cared too much;
About me;
About you.
But I was wrong.
I'm still wrong.
And that makes me sick.



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on Mar. 15 2010 at 10:17 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Hey again thanks again!! I'm so glad you could realte to this because I wanted girls to look at and think:that sounds lik something i would say. Thank you!

on Mar. 15 2010 at 7:36 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Hey there again!

This was really emotionally captivating. To me, it is very relate-able (especially when you said, "or maybe I cared too much".) It sounds just like me. Keep writing, it's really fantastic stuff you've got. :)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 11:57 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Thank u sooooooooo much!!

on Feb. 16 2010 at 10:24 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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I love the way you write because it's different, but in a good way, so keep up the good work!


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