Insight Into a Keyboard's Life MAG

February 6, 2010
By penandink105 GOLD, Needham, Massachusetts
penandink105 GOLD, Needham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
" all you need to make a comedy is a policeman, a park, and a pretty girl" it was on movies.com


i feel the press

and your brain.
some patrons dance softly upon
my eyes and arms

only compress into my soul
{firmly, and}
i only recognize your hands. ROUGH DRAFT.
i feel the press
of a good idea
I-D-E-A.
the secret shared between that screen
and your brain.
N-I-N-J-A.
You are a ninja
that circles and confuses the enemy
moving across my landscape
{fluttering,}
backspace. shift.
some patrons dance softly upon
my eyes and arms
while others
only compress into my soul
C-A-R-V-E.
{firmly, and}
i only recognize your hands.
y-OUR m-I-s-T-A-K-E-S.


The author's comments:
well, it's a keyboard's life while we make mistakes and type and type. the first part is actually my first simple rough draft. then i added a ninja.

OF AWESOME!

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on Jan. 2 2011 at 9:43 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like the idea, but somehow I can't really get the feel of it.


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