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i feel the press

and your brain.
some patrons dance softly upon
my eyes and arms

only compress into my soul
{firmly, and}
i only recognize your hands. ROUGH DRAFT.
i feel the press
of a good idea
I-D-E-A.
the secret shared between that screen
and your brain.
N-I-N-J-A.
You are a ninja
that circles and confuses the enemy
moving across my landscape
{fluttering,}
backspace. shift.
some patrons dance softly upon
my eyes and arms
while others
only compress into my soul
C-A-R-V-E.
{firmly, and}
i only recognize your hands.
y-OUR m-I-s-T-A-K-E-S.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2011 at 9:43 pm:
I like the idea, but somehow I can't really get the feel of it.
 
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