Planet

February 3, 2010
By Heidi Schneider SILVER, Mattapoisett, Massachusetts
Heidi Schneider SILVER, Mattapoisett, Massachusetts
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Swirling
Color above
Bright light flashes—a
wild coordinate of color
Rings
encircling.
Jeweled rings splashed with fire ‘n’ ice
Heat.
Cold.
And flames—
And storms
And clouds
And ice
Blue, crystal ice
Deep blue crystal mirrors of
carbon monoxide
ice
Floating marbles
streaked with
cat’s eye hurricanes.


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on Feb. 21 2010 at 9:14 am
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is a really great poem! You write so well!

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on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:53 pm
LL&S.PEB GOLD, Webster Groves, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The Best things in life are unseen, that is why we close our eyes to kiss, cry, and dream.

that is so good. u are very talented.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 11:44 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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