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One Girl

February 3, 2010
By rachey0924 BRONZE, Wayne, New Jersey
rachey0924 BRONZE, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
\"Love all, trust few. Do wrong to none.\"


One day at school
was all it took.
One more of that dirty look.
One friend to stand up for her
was all she needed.
One brave soul to fight
as she slowly pleaded.
One wrong decision slowly led to the next.
One girl who deserved nothing but the best.
One day she went home
as upset as could be.
One more person just like me.
I understood her every feeling.
No one ever noticed her slowly fading.
They would whisper then laugh.
She never knew why.
One more day at school
for that poor, helpless girl.


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Feliciateri said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 3:42 pm
Very nice poem. Didn't know you wrote poetry.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 10:31 am
Very nice Rachel - this could be a day in the life of any individual at any point in their life!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 10:58 pm
BradTastic17 GOLD, Russell, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I just ate an entire box of Lucky Charms cereal and I swear to god I can see into the future. ~Kurt Hummel

This poem's pretty good. It ended awful weak, but I really liked the feel of it. Keep it up.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 7:46 pm
rachey0924 BRONZE, Wayne, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Love all, trust few. Do wrong to none.\"

Hi everyone! It's Rachel, the author of this poem. Please rate and comment on my poem so I can get published. Thanks!