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the Midnight Soul

February 3, 2010
By mehstar BRONZE, Andover, Massachusetts
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mehstar BRONZE, Andover, Massachusetts
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The Midnight Soul,
It waits for me,
Black cape about shining white shoulders,
With hair of the darkest night,
It turns and blackness envelopes me,
It turns again to guide me through the blackest night,
The Midnight Soul,
The Moon

© Michael W., Niskayuna, NY

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Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 2:10 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

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I think it's good, it makes me think of the moon in a totally different way. :)
Nikiblue PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2010 at 4:12 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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It was ok, but I think you should have put "the moon" first and then cut out the last "the midnight soul" from the bottom. Keep it up though (: