When I Close My Eyes

February 3, 2010
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When I close my eyes and think of you,
I can see your face smiling back at me.
I can hear you laughing like you used to.
I can feel your fingers intertwined with mine.
I can remember how happy we were together,
How warm and comfortable you made me.
But when I open my eyes I see what's happening now.
It's someone else's face in front of me.
It doesn't make me as happy.
It's not as handsome as yours once was.
It's cold and crude,
Like standing in a cold rain.
Not comfortable,
Not happy,
Not You.
But it is there.
And maybe when his face looks at mine, he feels the same way I once did,
When I was with you.
When you used to Hold Me Tight.
But you're gone now, and never coming back.
I have to move on,
I have to let go.
But I don't know if I'll ever stop loving you.

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xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:54 pm
again, i can completely relate. Also, like u planned, it set thingz into a different  perspective 4 me. im sry bout wht happnd with ur 1st crush, but im glad ur happy agian :)) we all go thru dat 1st heartbreak, but we choose 2 get back up & dus ourselvez off. uve got some serious talent, dude. i luvv ur work. keep it upp & good luckk!! xP
HaleyDRog. replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 1:11 pm
I really liked this, a lot! I loved thw words you used and the flow of rythum. I also really loved the message. It was like you were telling a story and it made it even more wonderful! Really nice job. Keep up the tremendous work!
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